Post by rikkai_luvr on Feb 24, 2009 14:05:05 GMT 7
He he these are my first fanfics ever... 
I just tried to make it after I was converted to Rikkai's fan!
Before we start, I have some few words for you...
First, these stories have no Beta-Reader so I can't promise the grammar
Second, these are my first Tenipuri's ffs, I hope you like it
Third, If the apperance of your favorite characters are less, please don't blame me.
Forth, I'm still new to tenipuri though it's an old manga (not that old anyway) so the characters maybe OOC...
Fifth, the characters' characters are based on some fanfics I read...I conclude it myself
Sixth, I don't like Ryoma so It's only natural he got a little screen time
And...I didn't mean to offense any fansgroup here...hope you understand this ^^
So here are the story...
Disclaimer: I don't own Tenipuri
www.fanfiction.net/s/4857041/1/T_h_e_H_o_r_r_o_r
The first one:
Featured Characters:
Ryoma Echizen
Momoshiro Takeshi
Kaidoh Kaoru
Kikumaru Eiji
Kirihara Akaya
Marui Bunta
Masaharu Niou
Atobe Keigo
Gakuto Mukahi
Kajimoto (I don't remember his full name)
On The Story!
THE HORROR!
It was really a chill night, especially when thunders were around. 11 youngsters sat on the carpet each holding their own candles; they turned off the light to make it more exciting.
Their schools were invited by the wealthy Atobe Keigo to sleep over at his villa. Some buchous and tensais had fallen sleep at their own room, leaving them to their freedom time. It all started with Marui who couldn't sleep and dragged Niou and Akaya to stay with him. It just so happened that they found Mukahi, Eiji, Ryoma and Momo who were at the same state as them. They then dragged Atobe and Kajimoto who were from kitchen and Kaidoh who had just finished his midnight training.
When 'horror' was mentioned, Kaidoh immediately wanted to make his escape but unable to do so. So here he is sitting with them shaking in fear.
“And then...those hands were wrapped around her legs...dragging her down to the grave...” Momo said while making the 'horror' face.
Kaidoh had to hold himself not to hug whoever beside him.
The peach boy made a wide grin while pointed at his rival, “Look at your face, Mamushi! You look so pathetic!”
“Fssh...Shut up!” Kaidoh said glaring.
“Oh, why would I?” Momoshiro retorted.
Kajimoto sweatdropped, “Maa...let's continue, okay?” He said reassuringly.
The 2nd graders made an 'hmph', throwing their faces on the opposite sides.
“Sugi wa...Akaya-kun...”
“Yosh! I really have one scary story.”
Marui and Niou made a 'heeh...?' face as the red-haired tensais continued to chew his gum.
“It happened yesterday when everyone was sleeping...” Akaya started.
“Oh, you mean the time when you returned to your room with that frightened face?” Niou cut off.
“Yeah, that one...” The black-haired devil nodded before continued, “On that night...I saw it...”
“It?”
“Yeah, it.”
Everyone began to gulp as they stared at Akaya seriously.
Akaya lifted his head slowly, looking at 'companions', “I saw it...on the lounge room...”
GuLP!
“Lo...Lounge room?” They asked again noticing where they actually were.
Akaya nodded again and Kaidoh began to shaking harder than before.
They rest took another deep gulp before Akaya continued.
“I saw...
FUKUBUCHOU AND TEZUKA-SAN WERE CHATTING AND LAUGHING HAPPILY!!” Akaya finally cried out.
...
And that ended his story.
“...”
Silence filled the room and the one who recovered from the frozen time was...
Kajimoto twitched, “What? That isn't scary...”
“No.” The other cut off, “It really IS SCARY...” They said as they began to imagine scary Sanada and Tezuka are chatting and laughing 'HAPPILY'.
It really was a horror.
OWARI.
[bThe second one is this:[/b]
www.fanfiction.net/s/4867314/1/The_Grand_Ice_Skating_Match
It was the first day of Golden Week when suddenly a so-called 'Ore-sama' invited them to his villa. Yes, his villa. Which big is just like a castle or so what Momo and Eiji said.
Thanks to Oshitari's secret book of Information, the Hyotei Buchou managed to gather all the schools' tennis teams. ALL schools' TENNIS teams. And that including, Seigaku, Fudomine, Rikkai, Rokkaku, Shitenhouji, Higa, Johsei, Yamabuki, ST. Rudolph and of course Hyotei itself.
Despite the grumbled and curses they chanted, the regulars stood still listening to the long lecture of the wealthy Keigo Atobe. He was explaining their so-called 'extra combination' training or rather...another match.
After few minutes, the Hyotei leader ended his speech and replaced by Inui, Yanagi, Oshitari and Saeki.
The four smiling guys handed each of them a pair of skates. Although they were confused they still took it. They then were led by Oshitari to another door, which later revealed a very big ice arena. And somehow that explained everything, 'Ice Skating'.
Before the rules were told, they were allowed to prepare themselves physically and mentally.
Kaidoh and Momo had somehow cursing under their breath since Ice Skating wasn't their speciality.
However the tenses were raised when the group saw Yukimura and Fuji happily brought out their own skate and putting them in.
How did they know there will be Ice Skating anyway?
After they had lined up at the start line, Oshitari, Inui, Saeki and Yanagi cleared their throat, loud enough for the large group to hear.
Oshitari was the first to speak, “Welcome Gentlemen! We will now hold a Grand Match of Ice Skating! The rules are pretty simple...”
“Whoever reaches the finish first will be the winner. And you are also allowed to use whatever ways to win...” Saeki said smiling.
“The race will start when Sadaharu speaks,” Yanagi calmly added.
Inui fixed his glasses smiling, “20 people who lost...” At the moment he showed a big glass of water, Seigaku, Fudomine, Hyotei, Rokkaku, Shitenhouji and Higa disappeared from Rikkai and ST. Rudolph’s eyes.
“What was that?” Sanada and his team (except Yukimura) frowned as they watched the group ran like buffaloes.
Somehow they could hear them yelling: “I don't want to drink that!!”, “I don't want to die yet!!”, “Ore-sama will not lose!”, “Usu”, or something along that line.
To cut the long story, after about minutes Rikkai somehow managed to catch the previous starters. So here is the list:
In the First Line: Tezuka, Atobe, Sanada and Tachibana.
In the Second Line: Fuji and Yukimura and not very far from them was Shiraishi.
The rest group was pretty far away, and did I mention that Kaidoh had a trouble to skate?
Let's drop that topic.
The later group's speed slowly slowed down when they noticed a very gentle aura coming out of nowhere in their intense mood.
Turning their heads up ahead, they found Yukimura and Fuji who were chatting and laughing happily. Somehow, they group even wondered if they were twins.
They returned to their previous speed with carefully eavesdropping those beautiful yet scary guys’ conversation.
“So what do you think about the taste?” Yukimura asked.
“Saa...but I think it'll be delicious as always. However, I prefer to let them drink it instead of us.” Fuji replied smiling.
“You're right. It'll be more fun that way.” The blue-haired guy said also smiling.
Finally about an hour had passed. They were still no change at the lines. However the 4th lines had finally reached their limit. They began to wonder how long it would take them to reach the finish. And envied how Yukimura and Fuji still smiled and looked fresh as if they had just entered the arena.
Suddenly the 2nd line group stopped and followed by the rest. The 4th line tried to recover their stamina as they watched Yukimura and Fuji let the 1st line to make a pretty far distance with them.
Their pants were turned to gasps when suddenly the two angelic boys disappeared from their eyes. And as if they had wings, wait they really saw white wings, on their back, the Rikkai-buchou and the Seigaku’s tensai jumped over Tezuka, Atobe, Tachibana and Sanada who had stopped at the moment the two called them.
“
??!”
They even did a moon Sault before landed gracefully on the ice.
They turned to the frozen groups smiling, “Good Luck, minna”, and after giving blowing kisses, the two disappeared in a flash.
Their kisses planted softly on each boys' cheeks.
The first one who recovered was the emotionless Tezuka (who had noted himself to give Fuji 25 laps for jumping over him and gave the kiss) followed by Shiraishi, Atobe, Rokkaku, the rest of the group and finally Sanada.
Noticing the time they had lost, the so-called Seigaku Regulars which was in the 4th line smirked evilly.
“Kawamura-senpai!” A loud yell was heard and somehow Tezuka knew what was going on.
Kawamura turned his head around to find many people tried to stop something to land in his hand.
But it was too late.
The racket landed in the sushi guy's hand safe and sound.
And you know it.
“URYAAAAAAHH!! BURNING!!!!! MOVE!! MOVE!!!” He yelled out loudly as he smacked whoever in the way.
Thanks to their acrobatics, Eiji and Gakuto were saved. And being a buchou, Tezuka, Atobe, Tachibana, Sanada and Shiraishi were also saved.
Tezuka even managed to steal Taka's racket.
He turned to his back glaring at the larger group, “Momoshiro. Echizen.”
The two troublemakers tensed at the mention of their name.
“1,000 laps. Around the Villa. Tomorrow.” Tezuka stated very clearly before returning to skate.
The group only sighed as they left the Ah-Un pair.
I hate long story, so let's again cut it.
The time when Tezuka, Atobe, Shiraishi, Tachibana, Sanada and Sengoku arrived at the finish line, they were greeted by...
“Omedetto (sp?),” Fuji and Yukimura who were looked like had just taking shower and sipping their tea elegantly.
And guess who the losers were?
Kaidoh Kaoru who was hissing due to his lack skating skill and the fact he was going to die.
Kurobane who was smacking his partner, Davide.
And pretty much of Higa and Johsei who were also there.
Gakuto who was fainted because of Taka.
Momo who was almost won but lose by an inch from Yuuta.
Followed by Kite from Yamabuki and much to Fuji's joy, Mizuki.
“Ehem!” Inui cleared his throat as he brought his glasses filled of water, “Now...”
“There was an interruption before, so let me re-introduce this. 'SUPER DELUXE SROI'!!” Inui introduced excitedly.
“SROI?” The group repeated.
“Yes. This was created by me, Renji, Oshitari-kun and Saeki-kun.” Inui smirked as Seigaku, Rokkaku and Hyotei shuddered in fear.
“Yuushi! You traitor!” Gakuto shouted.
“Now, now...” Oshitari responded calmly fixing his glasses.
“What are all screaming about? This looks normal.” Marui said after giving a short observation still chewing his favourite gum.
“Want to give it a taste, Marui?” Yanagi asked.
Not noticing the glim in Inui's eyes and frightened face of the rest of teams (You know Seigaku and the others), Marui happily excepted the offer, “Sure.”
The 'know-what-will-happen' group quickly covered their eyes and seconds later a loud scream was heard.
“GWAAAAAAAAAAAAAKH!!!”
And...
THUMP!
Rikkai and ST. Rudolph's members' eyes widened as they watched Marui in no time laid on the floor, white-eyed.
Akaya and Niou took a step backwards in shock praying silently for their winning.
“Marui!” Sanada shook the Rikkai's red-haired guy trying to wake him up but to no avail.
Meanwhile, some of the sensitive members of Seigaku, Shitenhouji, Rokkaku and Hyotei had shed a tear in memorial.
Later...
The 20 losers took steps backward searching for escape and Inui took steps forward forcing them to take a sip of his brand new juice.
It only took 10 minutes for finally the losers were caught and forced to drink it. The screams were heard in the entire Villa.
Owari.
P.S. After re-checking it, I think I made a mistake on the losers' calculation, sorry. But please just read it.^_^
Yeah, the second one is longer...cause...no reason, really =.=
Please review...
I appreciate critic such as; you need to spice up or something like that...
but don't flames something like...I hate the story because the character is bla bla bla
or...
the grammar is really bad, cause I did mention that my grammar is bad and can't promise you.
That's it. Hope you like my stories ^_^
P.P.S. There is no spoiler tags??
I just tried to make it after I was converted to Rikkai's fan!
Before we start, I have some few words for you...
First, these stories have no Beta-Reader so I can't promise the grammar
Second, these are my first Tenipuri's ffs, I hope you like it
Third, If the apperance of your favorite characters are less, please don't blame me.
Forth, I'm still new to tenipuri though it's an old manga (not that old anyway) so the characters maybe OOC...
Fifth, the characters' characters are based on some fanfics I read...I conclude it myself
Sixth, I don't like Ryoma so It's only natural he got a little screen time
And...I didn't mean to offense any fansgroup here...hope you understand this ^^
So here are the story...
Disclaimer: I don't own Tenipuri
www.fanfiction.net/s/4857041/1/T_h_e_H_o_r_r_o_r
The first one:
Featured Characters:
Ryoma Echizen
Momoshiro Takeshi
Kaidoh Kaoru
Kikumaru Eiji
Kirihara Akaya
Marui Bunta
Masaharu Niou
Atobe Keigo
Gakuto Mukahi
Kajimoto (I don't remember his full name)
On The Story!
THE HORROR!
It was really a chill night, especially when thunders were around. 11 youngsters sat on the carpet each holding their own candles; they turned off the light to make it more exciting.
Their schools were invited by the wealthy Atobe Keigo to sleep over at his villa. Some buchous and tensais had fallen sleep at their own room, leaving them to their freedom time. It all started with Marui who couldn't sleep and dragged Niou and Akaya to stay with him. It just so happened that they found Mukahi, Eiji, Ryoma and Momo who were at the same state as them. They then dragged Atobe and Kajimoto who were from kitchen and Kaidoh who had just finished his midnight training.
When 'horror' was mentioned, Kaidoh immediately wanted to make his escape but unable to do so. So here he is sitting with them shaking in fear.
“And then...those hands were wrapped around her legs...dragging her down to the grave...” Momo said while making the 'horror' face.
Kaidoh had to hold himself not to hug whoever beside him.
The peach boy made a wide grin while pointed at his rival, “Look at your face, Mamushi! You look so pathetic!”
“Fssh...Shut up!” Kaidoh said glaring.
“Oh, why would I?” Momoshiro retorted.
Kajimoto sweatdropped, “Maa...let's continue, okay?” He said reassuringly.
The 2nd graders made an 'hmph', throwing their faces on the opposite sides.
“Sugi wa...Akaya-kun...”
“Yosh! I really have one scary story.”
Marui and Niou made a 'heeh...?' face as the red-haired tensais continued to chew his gum.
“It happened yesterday when everyone was sleeping...” Akaya started.
“Oh, you mean the time when you returned to your room with that frightened face?” Niou cut off.
“Yeah, that one...” The black-haired devil nodded before continued, “On that night...I saw it...”
“It?”
“Yeah, it.”
Everyone began to gulp as they stared at Akaya seriously.
Akaya lifted his head slowly, looking at 'companions', “I saw it...on the lounge room...”
GuLP!
“Lo...Lounge room?” They asked again noticing where they actually were.
Akaya nodded again and Kaidoh began to shaking harder than before.
They rest took another deep gulp before Akaya continued.
“I saw...
FUKUBUCHOU AND TEZUKA-SAN WERE CHATTING AND LAUGHING HAPPILY!!” Akaya finally cried out.
...
And that ended his story.
“...”
Silence filled the room and the one who recovered from the frozen time was...
Kajimoto twitched, “What? That isn't scary...”
“No.” The other cut off, “It really IS SCARY...” They said as they began to imagine scary Sanada and Tezuka are chatting and laughing 'HAPPILY'.
It really was a horror.
OWARI.
[bThe second one is this:[/b]
www.fanfiction.net/s/4867314/1/The_Grand_Ice_Skating_Match
The Grand Ice Skating Match
It was the first day of Golden Week when suddenly a so-called 'Ore-sama' invited them to his villa. Yes, his villa. Which big is just like a castle or so what Momo and Eiji said.
Thanks to Oshitari's secret book of Information, the Hyotei Buchou managed to gather all the schools' tennis teams. ALL schools' TENNIS teams. And that including, Seigaku, Fudomine, Rikkai, Rokkaku, Shitenhouji, Higa, Johsei, Yamabuki, ST. Rudolph and of course Hyotei itself.
Despite the grumbled and curses they chanted, the regulars stood still listening to the long lecture of the wealthy Keigo Atobe. He was explaining their so-called 'extra combination' training or rather...another match.
After few minutes, the Hyotei leader ended his speech and replaced by Inui, Yanagi, Oshitari and Saeki.
The four smiling guys handed each of them a pair of skates. Although they were confused they still took it. They then were led by Oshitari to another door, which later revealed a very big ice arena. And somehow that explained everything, 'Ice Skating'.
Before the rules were told, they were allowed to prepare themselves physically and mentally.
Kaidoh and Momo had somehow cursing under their breath since Ice Skating wasn't their speciality.
However the tenses were raised when the group saw Yukimura and Fuji happily brought out their own skate and putting them in.
How did they know there will be Ice Skating anyway?
---
After they had lined up at the start line, Oshitari, Inui, Saeki and Yanagi cleared their throat, loud enough for the large group to hear.
Oshitari was the first to speak, “Welcome Gentlemen! We will now hold a Grand Match of Ice Skating! The rules are pretty simple...”
“Whoever reaches the finish first will be the winner. And you are also allowed to use whatever ways to win...” Saeki said smiling.
“The race will start when Sadaharu speaks,” Yanagi calmly added.
Inui fixed his glasses smiling, “20 people who lost...” At the moment he showed a big glass of water, Seigaku, Fudomine, Hyotei, Rokkaku, Shitenhouji and Higa disappeared from Rikkai and ST. Rudolph’s eyes.
“What was that?” Sanada and his team (except Yukimura) frowned as they watched the group ran like buffaloes.
Somehow they could hear them yelling: “I don't want to drink that!!”, “I don't want to die yet!!”, “Ore-sama will not lose!”, “Usu”, or something along that line.
---
To cut the long story, after about minutes Rikkai somehow managed to catch the previous starters. So here is the list:
In the First Line: Tezuka, Atobe, Sanada and Tachibana.
In the Second Line: Fuji and Yukimura and not very far from them was Shiraishi.
The rest group was pretty far away, and did I mention that Kaidoh had a trouble to skate?
Let's drop that topic.
The later group's speed slowly slowed down when they noticed a very gentle aura coming out of nowhere in their intense mood.
Turning their heads up ahead, they found Yukimura and Fuji who were chatting and laughing happily. Somehow, they group even wondered if they were twins.
They returned to their previous speed with carefully eavesdropping those beautiful yet scary guys’ conversation.
“So what do you think about the taste?” Yukimura asked.
“Saa...but I think it'll be delicious as always. However, I prefer to let them drink it instead of us.” Fuji replied smiling.
“You're right. It'll be more fun that way.” The blue-haired guy said also smiling.
---
Finally about an hour had passed. They were still no change at the lines. However the 4th lines had finally reached their limit. They began to wonder how long it would take them to reach the finish. And envied how Yukimura and Fuji still smiled and looked fresh as if they had just entered the arena.
Suddenly the 2nd line group stopped and followed by the rest. The 4th line tried to recover their stamina as they watched Yukimura and Fuji let the 1st line to make a pretty far distance with them.
Their pants were turned to gasps when suddenly the two angelic boys disappeared from their eyes. And as if they had wings, wait they really saw white wings, on their back, the Rikkai-buchou and the Seigaku’s tensai jumped over Tezuka, Atobe, Tachibana and Sanada who had stopped at the moment the two called them.
“
??!”They even did a moon Sault before landed gracefully on the ice.
They turned to the frozen groups smiling, “Good Luck, minna”, and after giving blowing kisses, the two disappeared in a flash.
Their kisses planted softly on each boys' cheeks.
---
The first one who recovered was the emotionless Tezuka (who had noted himself to give Fuji 25 laps for jumping over him and gave the kiss) followed by Shiraishi, Atobe, Rokkaku, the rest of the group and finally Sanada.
Noticing the time they had lost, the so-called Seigaku Regulars which was in the 4th line smirked evilly.
“Kawamura-senpai!” A loud yell was heard and somehow Tezuka knew what was going on.
Kawamura turned his head around to find many people tried to stop something to land in his hand.
But it was too late.
The racket landed in the sushi guy's hand safe and sound.
And you know it.
“URYAAAAAAHH!! BURNING!!!!! MOVE!! MOVE!!!” He yelled out loudly as he smacked whoever in the way.
Thanks to their acrobatics, Eiji and Gakuto were saved. And being a buchou, Tezuka, Atobe, Tachibana, Sanada and Shiraishi were also saved.
Tezuka even managed to steal Taka's racket.
He turned to his back glaring at the larger group, “Momoshiro. Echizen.”
The two troublemakers tensed at the mention of their name.
“1,000 laps. Around the Villa. Tomorrow.” Tezuka stated very clearly before returning to skate.
The group only sighed as they left the Ah-Un pair.
---
I hate long story, so let's again cut it.
The time when Tezuka, Atobe, Shiraishi, Tachibana, Sanada and Sengoku arrived at the finish line, they were greeted by...
“Omedetto (sp?),” Fuji and Yukimura who were looked like had just taking shower and sipping their tea elegantly.
And guess who the losers were?
Kaidoh Kaoru who was hissing due to his lack skating skill and the fact he was going to die.
Kurobane who was smacking his partner, Davide.
And pretty much of Higa and Johsei who were also there.
Gakuto who was fainted because of Taka.
Momo who was almost won but lose by an inch from Yuuta.
Followed by Kite from Yamabuki and much to Fuji's joy, Mizuki.
“Ehem!” Inui cleared his throat as he brought his glasses filled of water, “Now...”
“There was an interruption before, so let me re-introduce this. 'SUPER DELUXE SROI'!!” Inui introduced excitedly.
“SROI?” The group repeated.
“Yes. This was created by me, Renji, Oshitari-kun and Saeki-kun.” Inui smirked as Seigaku, Rokkaku and Hyotei shuddered in fear.
“Yuushi! You traitor!” Gakuto shouted.
“Now, now...” Oshitari responded calmly fixing his glasses.
“What are all screaming about? This looks normal.” Marui said after giving a short observation still chewing his favourite gum.
“Want to give it a taste, Marui?” Yanagi asked.
Not noticing the glim in Inui's eyes and frightened face of the rest of teams (You know Seigaku and the others), Marui happily excepted the offer, “Sure.”
The 'know-what-will-happen' group quickly covered their eyes and seconds later a loud scream was heard.
“GWAAAAAAAAAAAAAKH!!!”
And...
THUMP!
Rikkai and ST. Rudolph's members' eyes widened as they watched Marui in no time laid on the floor, white-eyed.
Akaya and Niou took a step backwards in shock praying silently for their winning.
“Marui!” Sanada shook the Rikkai's red-haired guy trying to wake him up but to no avail.
Meanwhile, some of the sensitive members of Seigaku, Shitenhouji, Rokkaku and Hyotei had shed a tear in memorial.
Later...
The 20 losers took steps backward searching for escape and Inui took steps forward forcing them to take a sip of his brand new juice.
It only took 10 minutes for finally the losers were caught and forced to drink it. The screams were heard in the entire Villa.
Owari.
P.S. After re-checking it, I think I made a mistake on the losers' calculation, sorry. But please just read it.^_^
Yeah, the second one is longer...cause...no reason, really =.=
Please review...
I appreciate critic such as; you need to spice up or something like that...
but don't flames something like...I hate the story because the character is bla bla bla
or...
the grammar is really bad, cause I did mention that my grammar is bad and can't promise you.
That's it. Hope you like my stories ^_^
P.P.S. There is no spoiler tags??
